Mission 1

Echo Jaegar

New Member 17 He/Him

Faction Eclipse Raven

Faction Rank Master Mind

Character Rank Senior

Gold Stars Not applicable

Element Light

Infamy 103

Deceiving Light

Xaldin ♔ Eastern

510 posts ♔ Yul:

Mission 1 Apr 4, 2022 22:26:32 GMT -5

Post by Echo Jaegar on Apr 4, 2022 22:26:32 GMT -5

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[attr="class","shadowsTitle"] Junior [break] Rogue

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[attr="class","shadowsHead"] Finding the Sword in the Dark

You have heard rumors of something dark brewing, and you wanna find out what it is. These rumors have led you to a item known as 'The Black Key'. This key is said to be the answer to getting to the answers you want, as it opens a door to something ancient out in the wildlands. Your job is to steal the key from the traveling magic artifact exhibit, so later you may go seek out your answers. Look out though, I heard the exhibit hired security.

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[attr="class","shadowsSub"]Details

Maximum Number of Players: 2
[break]Minimum Word Count: 2000
[break]Location: Kikka
[break]Special Requirements: Steal the key, and hold it for safe keeping. Deal with the magic knights how you see fit.

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What NPCs are in this mission? Please fill out the template for any notable NPCs. While those you have to socially interact with during the mission are not required, any enemy that is presented in the mission must be listed here.

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Name of NPC: Security Guards X2 per Player

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Health Limit: Intermediate
[break]Physical Speed: 10 m/s
[break]Physical Damage: Junior
[break]Magic Element and Types: Fire and Ice Attack and Defense Creation
[break]Combat Style: The fire using guard will try to fight you up close and personal. while the ice magic user will attack from range using shards of very sharp ice.
[break]Additional Information:N/A

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Last Edit: Apr 28, 2022 13:16:53 GMT -5 by Echo Jaegar

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Griswold

New Member 22 He/Him

Faction Magic Knights - Black Bulls

Faction Rank Grand 4th Class

Character Rank Archmage

Gold Stars 218

Element Air Pressure/Beast

Infamy Not Applicable

Solarian Wolf

Griswold ♔

1,102 posts ♔ Yul:

Mission 1 Apr 5, 2022 16:15:49 GMT -5

Post by Griswold on Apr 5, 2022 16:15:49 GMT -5

Alright, it's your friendly neighborhood Spiderman, here to have a look at your stuff.

First off:

Must kill all magic knight recruits and report back to Echo.

I gave this some thought, but the long and short of it is that there is no reason to report back to Echo since he isn't going to be paying them with his own money after the fact. If he were the leader of an organization, I could see reason in them having to sign in with the person in question. But since this is just a rather generic mission telling you "Hey Rogue, go kill a bunch of aspiring magic knights and report back to me" feels like a lot of self-glorification to seem greater than the sum of your parts.

So this needs to either be changed, or become leader of an organization.

Second:

Health Limit: Senior
Physical Speed: 10 m/s
Physical Damage: Intermediate

If you'd give junior rogues a mission where they'd need to kill two people with senior health that strike for intermediate and move a fair deal faster than your average junior, people would realistically be getting themselves killed. Even if two juniors were to do this, they'd face 4 people with senior health that strike for a lot, and have magic spells that would realistically strike for more than they could dish out or defend against. So that needs to be lowered on all accounts.

Third and Last:

The mission itself sounds very much like someone making an attempt at being a big shot before it was truly their time to shine. Like I mentioned before, it doesn't make sense for a random rogue to behave larger than the sum of their parts by having people kill a bunch of trainee knights and reporting back to that same rogue. Not only would it make the rogue look lazy and bad at his job, it also creates the idea that a noble heading to the land of Spade would do so while guarded by people who are barely magic knights at the point they'd be getting assassinated.

So all in all, there are also a lot of inconsistencies with the mission parameters.

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Griswold

New Member 22 He/Him

Faction Magic Knights - Black Bulls

Faction Rank Grand 4th Class

Character Rank Archmage

Gold Stars 218

Element Air Pressure/Beast

Infamy Not Applicable

Solarian Wolf

Griswold ♔

1,102 posts ♔ Yul:

Mission 1 Apr 28, 2022 10:42:39 GMT -5

Post by Griswold on Apr 28, 2022 10:42:39 GMT -5

Alrighty, considering how this is now a completely new mission, we're going to forget what was said in the post right above this one.

So, what I can say with this is that there is a slight coding issue with the mission description that made part of the text bigger than the rest, which is kinda making things look a bit wonky, so i'd suggest fixing that up to make it look more smooth.

Aside from that, this missions looks fine.

Also, this is a mission chain, i'm assuming?

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Griswold New Member 22 He/Him Faction Magic Knights - Black Bulls Faction Rank Grand 4th Class Character Rank Archmage Gold Stars 218 Element Air Pressure/Beast Infamy Not Applicable Solarian Wolf Griswold ♔ 1,102 posts ♔ Yul:	Mission 1 Apr 28, 2022 13:30:09 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Griswold on Apr 28, 2022 13:30:09 GMT -5
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Post by Echo Jaegar on Apr 4, 2022 22:26:32 GMT -5

Post by Griswold on Apr 5, 2022 16:15:49 GMT -5

Post by Griswold on Apr 28, 2022 10:42:39 GMT -5

Post by Griswold on Apr 28, 2022 13:30:09 GMT -5