In this world, Magic is Everything. All people, all races, are granted with the power to perform mystical and magical feats via grimories, mystical tomes granted to each and every child on their 15th birthday. Those blessed by the mana can have their names written down in legend.
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Post by quintillian on Jul 30, 2024 21:06:00 GMT -5
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[attr="class","header"]Rolfe [break]Stalwart
"You will learn to fear the son of a shepherd"
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5'9 Feet and inches
205 Pounds
Black
Hazel
Rolfe is young man standing at the height of 5'9. A decent sized almond shaped head with a shiny skin complexion. A rich deep tawny brown skin tone. Soft rounded deer eyes and a sharp nose. Topped with medium length black locs that droop to his brows.But not enough to blind his field of vision. He has a lean and strong frame from years of farm work. However he isn't toned enough to be deemed ripped. Noticeable scars littered across his arms and calloused hands.
Rolfe is always seen wearing a reliable pair of brown or black boots. He keeps his loose black pants tucked neatly within the boots. A constant rotation of comfortable tunics and suspenders maintains his wardrobe. He keeps a pair of grey tinted googles that fit snug against his face. A single white headband helps maintain and mold his hair when moving.
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Rolfe is calm and indifferent soul at his core due to countless years of isolation. He bears no real hatred nor otherwise towards most people. In all actuality he was ever so curious. Rolfe pondered about everything around in some attempt to find meaning. He is not easily motivated outside of doing what was taught to him. He is kind because wishes to be treated as such and has some semblance of care. His core foundational beliefs of do right by others and live a good life just weren't impressionable.
This manifest in his day to day as being severely quaint. He has strong and common manners in most social scenarios. He opens doors for others and offers aide to those in need as he was raised. He appreciates the little things but rarely ever feels fufillment.
Instead of adding 10 to your mana pool for every 5 points to stamina, you can add 15 to your mana pool for every 5 points to stamina this will increase to 20 once you reach grand. This perk may be applied retroactively.
For every post that a person is in combat, they will gain +3 m/s in their base speed capping at +30 m/s speed or 10 posts. If they step out of combat, their speed boost would drop by 5 m/s per post until they reach their base speed.
Allows you to gain +1 advance spec perks for a certain magic spec. This is only applicable to one spec per purchase, these cannot stack. This is applicable for all ranks and will let you bypass your rank’s restriction on the number of advanced perks one may have. Sage of [Magic Spec] does not give you an advanced spec perk. You still have to use a perk slot to gain the additional advanced spec. You may buy up to 3 of these perks. Each time you purchase the cost of the perk goes up +1 slot.
You may apply 1 Attack Creation, Defense Creation, Physical Reinforcement, Supplementary Creation, or Transformation Spell to your golems via your mana tether with it. This spell must be single spec and cast by you or an item you own.
MAGIC DESCRIPTION: Rolfe takes his love for sculpting
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Post by Sol Delothosin✾ on Aug 14, 2024 7:58:08 GMT -5
Hello I'll be grading you today
a few things
Profile-
so you need a side image for your profile as well your mini picture is 150x150 and the profile pic is 270x400
if your apping into a squad you need to put a dash as well by it so it would be MK-Green Mantis
Personaility-
-this doesnt tells us how he is day to day so perhaps expand on that a bit.
-boasting sarcasm isnt really being mischievous its more being arrogant, something like some subtle teasing or taking a bit of delight in perhaps tripping an opponent.
-so how does he instill confidence that needs to be expanded on a bit
-as far as enjoying crushing and overwhelming foes he needs to be careful on this since this can venture into rogue territory
-pushing foes into submission is something that has to be careful about as you can beat someone into submission which would be a overuse of force and something that would get him in hot water with Sol quickly
-that ending part of doing what needs to be done and feeling sorrow from it it contridicts the enjoyment that is mentioned earlier so it needs to be.
History-
-farms are mostly found in the forsaken relm and common region is where most of the population live
-if he was growing up without his mother would he really know his father was any different.
-The wrapping to his back can you reword this just a bit because I was confused and thought it was the son that did it and not the father.
-So the parents having titles is not something we will allow as once we do that it becomes canon for the actual site , so they could be known for their deeds by those they have helped and perhaps people might know their appearance or magics
-if one wants to have characters with titles in their backstory they need to speak to the admin to get permission as well as how it will work into the site
-also those that have titles are basicly celebritys so staying out of the spotlight is next to impossible
-there are many knights that are faster then most so the uncommon for a common knight is a bit confusing
-as far as magic goes he would show small signs of it before he obtained hisent grimoire he would be able to do the simplist of things so like making sparks of electricity. Also we dont inherit magic he would have been born with the element
-as he would have been born with the magic it wouldnt be her giving her love and strength
-not many people throw spells out long rang or aoe many of them are mid to close range fighters like Valo or Ardere
-There is no such thing as refinining magic as anyone can use close range combat or Physical reinforcement, it could be that they were smart about using the mana they had and were not wasteful.
-How could his father dream of being a magic knight if he was already one if your wanting this it would be better to say he dreamed of becoming a magic knight once again.
-So for getting into the green mantis it wouldnt be martial skill alone as the MKE is composed of an exhibition of skills as well as a misson/dungeon that the participants do to show how they work with others, there is pvp as well for that and its from that the captains decide who they want.
Magic-
-if your going with a close range type knight then area of triump might not be the best choice.
-You have Attack when it should be Attack Creation
-so like before there's no compounding and refining mana but you could say he is wise about his spell usage
-how would he know the style his mother used unless his father knew the style and taught him it which means it would be in your history as we.
-you show that he likes to use PR for speed but does he use reinforcement for anything else?
-your showing how he uses Physical reinforcement but I need a bit more on how he uses attack creation, is it bolts of lightning or spheres of it im sure he has other things besides punches and kicks
-so instead of the word exploding I would use the word racing perhaps as exploding is more attributed to Fire magic.
-With blasts from palms and feet I would switch it up and say a burst of electricity so that way it doesnt seem like stepping into something onto other anime/ fighting game territory.
please make the required edits then feel free to put it back up for grading