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Name of Spell: Koganebari (黄金張り) - Midnight Petal Edge Elemental Type: Sword(Pure Aura) Rank & Spell Type: Intermediate | Attack Creation Range & Speed: Self | 20 m/s Mana Cost: 16/8 Stats Effected: N/A Applicable Perks: Overpowerd, Apex Predator, Mana Conservationist Description: The user raises their left hand to the sky and says “Koganebari” which summons forth the sword to their hand. The sword takes the form of a multi colored broadsword with the blade being surrounded by pulsating dark blue mana. The sword has a silver edges, while the center and guard are black with golden decorative accents. The guard of the sword features a prominent red jewel, while the is wrapped in black cloth and ends in a golden ornament. The blade measures 36 inches in length.
Aura Style: Thousand Midnight Cherry Blossoms Specialization(s): Attack Creation Element: Pure Aura Mana Cost: 20 Range & Speed: 20 Meter AoE | 20 m/s Stats Affected: N/A Description:The user holds the sword in front of them(with the tip pointing towards the ground) before saying the word “scatter” which activates the sword’s ability. Upon activation the sword creates dark blue colored pure aura, taking on the shape of a large cloud in the shape of cherry blossoms. The cloud uses the user as the epicenter for an AoE attack capable of moving 20 m/s, and reaching out 10 meters from the caster on all sides. The cloud starts as a small ball(10 inches) in front of the user, before it expands at a speed of 20 m/s. This cloud deals intermediate rank damage, and the ability can be used once for 2 post before going on a 3 post cooldown.
Name of Spell: Shingetsu(New Moon) Elemental Type: Sword(Pure Aura) Rank &Spell Type: Junior | Attack Creation Range & Speed: Self | 10 m/s Mana Cost: 8/4 Stats Effected: N/A Applicable Perks: Overpowerd, Apex Predator, Mana Conservationist Description: The user says the phrase "Erase the moon Shingetsu" to summon the sword. The sword takes on the appearance of a simple katana, with no guard or traditional handle. The sword features a silver and black blade, with dark blue mana pulsating around the blade. The blade in question measures 31.5 inches in length, and has white cloth wrapped around where the handle should be.
Aura Style: Mugetsu(Moonless Sky) Specialization(s): Attack Creation Element: Pure Aura Mana Cost: 10 Range & Speed: 25 Meters | 10 m/s Stats Affected: N/A Description:The user taps their right index and middle finger to the end of the hilt 2 times in rapid succession to activate the ability. Upon activation the user points the sword in the direction of their intended target, as they create a ball of dark blue mana at the end of the sword. The ball starts at a size of 8 inches in circumference, but after a few moments the ball will grow to 30 inches in circumference, before firing towards the target at a speed of 10 m/s for 25 meters. The aura orb deals junior rank damage, and using knockback rules can send anyone hit backwards 2 meters+5 for every 10 power the user has. Using the ammo rules the user can create more orbs for additional attacks. The ability can be used once for 2 post before going on a 3 post cooldown.
- Which hand is raised to the sky? - Pure Aura wouldn't do wisps they'd make the blade edge glow or pulse most likely
Aura Style: Thousand Midnight Cherry Blossoms
- How exactly does he hold the sword out in front of him? Example: point facing towards the enemy, point facing towards the sky, point facing towards the ground etc. - Please note your mana can only be one colour and it keeps to a single shade of that colour regardless of what element it's using, this can alter as you learn more elements however. - Without ammo rules it would be only one piece of pure aura that can be made unless this is an aoe - As you are using cubic meters, especially with such a large cloud size this would be changed to an aoe please fix that
Shingetsu(New Moon)
- Which hand are you using? - You may want to rethink the activation as it is something that you could do without thinking and would activate the spell - Pure Aura wouldn't do wisps they'd make the blade edge glow or pulse most likely - Add that the charge lasts for only 2 rounds before needing a 3 round cooldown
Aura Style: Mugetsu
- Which hand are you using? - How big is the ball at the end of the point? - Please add the damage that it does if it lands a hit - I'd add blinding and/or knockback - Add that the charge lasts for only 2 rounds before needing a 3 round cooldown
When these things are done feel free to put them back up for grading
Post by Amaya Ravencrest✾ on Jul 24, 2023 4:20:46 GMT -5
Aura Style: Thousand Midnight Cherry Blossoms
Your cloud can only go 20 meters as it is a 20 meters for aoe
The Impact will not exceed that 20 meters it is able to travel
Additional clouds from the ammo rules would cut the size of the cloud for each additional cloud ( I.E a second cloud would be 10 meters in size but still to go 20 meters distance, 3 would be 6.6. 4 would be 5. etc.)
The Abilities can be used for a 2 post rounds before going on the cool down
Aura Style: Mugetsu
I would suggest for your activation for that ability to be tapping the end of the hilt instead of your temple.
As Enlil has asked before we are wanting the know the size of the orb at the end of the tip when it first shows up.
The Actual formula is 2m +5 for every 10 power
Note for future spells: your blades lengths at the moment are the length of broad swords, which are two handed. So if they are meant to be one handed I would watch the said length
Post by Amaya Ravencrest✾ on Jul 25, 2023 4:15:42 GMT -5
Hello I will be grading once again:
Aura Style: Thousand Midnight Cherry Blossoms
creates several pieces of dark blue colored pure aura
We are wanting to know more of what these pieces are? are they cherry blossom shape? maybe strands of pure aura, jigsaw pieces. this makes me think it is broken into pieces, pure aura isn't broken, it is like strands and what not are better for pure aura
how big is the cloud, is it small to start then expand? is it big? how big is it.
Uh no this wouldn't work 20 meters is from one side to the other, so it would be 10 meters either way not 20
So your second spell is fine but you do realize the single target spell can go 25 meters right? if you want it to go 20 that is fine but 25 is the max range.
When changes have been made put it back up for grading we will get on it as soon as possible
Post by Ostanda Vermilion on Jul 27, 2023 3:04:34 GMT -5
Hello I will be grading you again: [b]Name of Spell:[/b] Koganebari (黄金張り) - Midnight Petal Edge
[b]Elemental Type:[/b] Sword(Pure Aura)
[b]Rank & Spell Type:[/b] Intermediate | Attack Creation
[b]Range & Speed:[/b] Self | 20 m/s
[b]Mana Cost:[/b] 16/8
[b]Stats Effected:[/b] N/A
[b]Applicable Perks:[/b] Overpowerd, Apex Predator, Mana Conservationist
[b]Description:[/b] The user raises their left hand to the sky and says “Koganebari” which summons forth the sword to their hand. The sword takes the form of a multi colored broadsword with the blade being surrounded by pulsating dark blue mana. The sword has a silver edges, while the center and guard are black with golden decorative accents. The guard of the sword features a prominent red jewel, while the is wrapped in black cloth and ends in a golden ornament. The blade measures 36 inches in length.
[b][font color="“B53636”"]Description:[/font][/b]The user holds the sword in front of them(with the tip pointing towards the ground) before saying the word “scatter” which activates the sword’s ability. Upon activation the sword creates dark blue colored pure aura, taking on the shape of a large cloud in the shape of cherry blossoms. The cloud uses the user as the epicenter for an AoE attack capable of moving 20 m/s, and reaching out 10 meters from the caster on all sides. The cloud starts as a small ball(10 inches) in front of the user, before it expands at a speed of 20 m/s. This cloud deals intermediate rank damage, and the ability can be used once for 2 post before going on a 3 post cooldown.[/spoiler]
[b]Applicable Perks:[/b] Overpowerd, Apex Predator, Mana Conservationist
[b]Description:[/b] The user says the phrase "Erase the moon Shingetsu" to summon the sword. The sword takes on the appearance of a simple katana, with no guard or traditional handle. The sword features a silver and black blade, with dark blue mana pulsating around the blade. The blade in question measures 31.5 inches in length, and has white cloth wrapped around where the handle should be.
[b][font color="“B53636”"]Description:[/font][/b]The user taps their right index and middle finger to the end of the hilt 2 times in rapid succession to activate the ability. Upon activation the user points the sword in the direction of their intended target, as they create a ball of dark blue mana at the end of the sword. The ball starts at a size of 8 inches in circumference, but after a few moments the ball will grow to 30 inches in circumference, before firing towards the target at a speed of 10 m/s for 25 meters. The aura orb deals junior rank damage, and using knockback rules can send anyone hit backwards 2 meters+5 for every 10 power the user has. Using the ammo rules the user can create more orbs for additional attacks. The ability can be used once for 2 post before going on a 3 post cooldown.[/spoiler]
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