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Post by Leonard Vermillion on Aug 24, 2023 13:03:12 GMT -5
Name of Spell: Beast Magic: Vulpes Celeritas Elemental Type: Beast Aura Rank & Spell Type: Senior || Physical Reinforcement Range & Speed: Self || 40 m/s Mana Cost: 30 || 15 Stats Effected: 10m/s Applicable Perks: N/A Description: Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user's mana wraps around his boots, looking like an orange-ish aura holding a strong resemblance to that of fox paws. While under the effect of the spell, the user's physical speed is increased by 10m/s.
Name of Spell: Beast Magic: Vulpes Fortitudo Elemental Type: Beast Aura Rank & Spell Type: Senior || Physical Reinforcement Range & Speed: Self || 40 m/s Mana Cost: 30 || 15 Stats Effected: Intermediate Strength Applicable Perks: N/A Description: Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user's mana wraps forms a pair of reddish-orange gauntlets with a strong resemblance of a fox's own paws around the user's arms. While under the effect of the spell, the user's physical strenght is increased to Intermediate rank.
Name of Spell: Beast Magic: Vulpes Vitalitas Elemental Type: Beast Aura Rank & Spell Type: Senior || Physical Reinforcement Range & Speed: Self || 40 m/s Mana Cost: 30 || 15 Stats Effected: Senior Endurability Applicable Perks: N/A Description: Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user is able to use the mana around them like a suit of protective armor by adding an extra layer of vermillion red aura that lines his body from the neck down, ignoring the damage of a single attack per post equal to the rank or below of the spell (Senior). If the opposing attacker has LESS THAN 20 power over the user's durability stat, the user will be able to ignore all damage. If the opposing attacker MORE THAN 20 power over the user's durability stat, the user will be able to ignore half of the damage.
Name of Spell: Beast Magic: Vulpes Irascibilis Elemental Type: Beast Aura Rank & Spell Type: Senior || Physical Reinforcement Range & Speed: Self || 40 m/s Mana Cost: 30 || 15 Stats Effected: +9Power Applicable Perks: N/A Description: Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user gets covered in glowing red claw like markings which spread all over the chest, arms, back and legs. While under the effects of this spell, the user's power is increased by 9.
Name of Spell: Lava Magic: Torrens Igneus Elemental Type: Lava Rank & Spell Type: Senior || Attack Creation Range & Speed: 80m || 40 m/s Mana Cost: 30 || 15 Stats Effected: N/A Applicable Perks: Build Up Description: Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user lobs a ball of lava at the target, which ignites and turns into something akin to a grenade no bigger than a baseball that will explode burn the enemy upon impact, inflicting Senior damage to the target. As per ammo rules, additional projectiles can be created and fired once per 30 Control.
Post by Sol Delothosin✾ on Aug 26, 2023 3:44:37 GMT -5
Hello So I will be grading today
a few things
-so for all four Beast aura spells you gave the range but you still need to add speed as well please edit accordingly.
-Also for stats effected you need to add the number increase of the buff along with what type it is
Vulpes Celeritas
-what color is the aura?
-So this spell wouldnt interact with other spells in the way of adding tails so that part needs to be removed or edited,
-so unless you were using transformation your legs wouldnt swell or bulk up they would look the same just wrapped in your aura.
Vulpes Fortitudo
-so once again you cannot have this spell interacting with others in the way of adding tails per spell used.
-Again unless it was transformation your chest and arms wont bulk up
Vulpes Vitalitas
-so this does not add other tails to him based on other spells cast on him
-so this spell needs a complete rework as this is not a physical reinforcement spell this literaly reads as a Defense creation spell so it needs to be completely redone
Vulpes Vitalitas 2
-this spell wouldnt add another tail by interacting with any of the other spells
-your wouldnt be able to change your canines or nails without transformation but you could make tha aura form longer nails
Torrens Igneus
-how big is the splash
-is the spell doing damage over time if the lava sticks to the target?
-This spell seems a bit bare as far as detail goes
please make the required edits then feel free to put it back up for grading.
Post by Amaya Ravencrest✾ on Aug 27, 2023 13:13:46 GMT -5
Hello Leonard I will be grading you today:
If you do have an issue with a mod's grading, please dm them as calling them out within a grading is just rude.
Again as stated your fox aura spells can not adapt and add on to each other, this is not kurama's tailed beast chakra, your have beast aura, very very different. I like the idea but I think we can adapt the theme even better with my suggestions below
All your speeds would still have a spell speed for it to be casted which is 40 m/s
With those points out of the way lets get to the actual grading shall we
Beast Magic: Vulpes Celeritas
instead of putting physicals speed as the stats affects. Put 10m/s
Since this is more speed buff why not just have something like an orange aura wrapping around his boots, holding a strongly looks like that of fox like paws.
All Aura users aura has a color, which is that of their mana so you need to add that
Beast Magic: Vulpes Fortitudo
Again instead of putting physical strength in stats affected you would put intermediate strength buff
Since this is more of a spell to buffing your strength, how about making it in the form of gauntlets with a strong resemblance of a fox's own paws
as stated you don't bulk up within your aura
Potential Unleashed: Vulpes Vitalitas
Again instead of putting physical Endurance Put Senior Endurability.
Since this is to be like an extra layer of armor, why not have it be just an extra layer of aura that lines his body from the neck down.
keep the physical durability rules
Potential Unleashed: Vulpes Irascibilis
Put +9 power in stats affected
I would make the appearance of the spell something different as each spell should look different and not the same. why not make claw like gautlets or make claw like markings on your muscles from your aura?
Lava Magic: Torrens Igneus
You don't glob mana, you would toss a ball of lava
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[b style="color:rgb(214, 115, 35);"]Description:[/b][span style="color:rgb(214, 115, 35);"] Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user is able to use the mana around them like a suit of protective armor by adding an extra layer of vermillion red aura that lines his body from the neck down, ignoring the damage of a single attack per post equal to the rank or below of the spell (Senior). If the opposing attacker has LESS THAN 20 power over the user's durability stat, the user will be able to ignore all damage. If the opposing attacker MORE THAN 20 power over the user's durability stat, the user will be able to ignore half of the damage.
[b]Description: [/b]Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user gets covered in glowing red claw like markings which spread all over the chest, arms, back and legs. While under the effects of this spell, the user's power is increased by 9.[/font][span style="color:rgb(214, 115, 35);"][/span][/div]
[b]Rank & Spell Type:[/b] Senior || Attack Creation
[b]Range & Speed:[/b] 80m || 40 m/s
[b]Mana Cost: [/b]30 || 15
[b]Stats Effected:[/b] N/A
[b]Applicable Perks:[/b] Build Up
[b]Description:[/b] Once the spell is cast by enunciating the name, the user lobs a ball of lava at the target, which ignites and turns into something akin to a grenade no bigger than a baseball that will explode burn the enemy upon impact, inflicting Senior damage to the target. As per ammo rules, additional projectiles can be created and fired once per 30 Control.[/font][span style="color:rgb(214, 115, 35);"][/span][/div][div][div][/div][/div][div][div][/div][/div]
