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Rank & Element: Junior Glass Class & Type: Magic Weapon Bow Magic Specializations: Attack Creation Appearance & Lore: The Magic Glass Crossbow is a modified Design created by Yugos mother, who used it to great effect combined with her own magic. Yugo, possessing the same type of Magic as his mother, recieved this weapon after his mothers death. The Magic Glass Crossbow is designed from a durable wood that has a metallic appearance when polished. The item weights about 5-6 pounds all together. it is 2 feet long by half a foot wide.
Type & Uses: Trigger | 4 Uses Rank & Specialization: Junior Attack Creation Mana Cost: 8 per Trigger | 15 to unjam Range & Speed: 25 meters | 10 meter speed Stats Affected: Knockback Description:
To activate the ability the user condenses their mana around the bow activating near invisible runes that have been placed up the crossbow, once activated the crossbow will create a reinforced glass arrow that when released will go in the general direction of the one they are trying to hit. If this arrow successfully hits it does junior rank damage and proceeds to do a 2m knockback with an additional 5m being added for every 10 power the user has. With the use of ammo rules additional arrows can be made per trigger.
Post by Hania Ravencrest✾ on Apr 10, 2021 16:59:19 GMT -5
Hi there, just a few things before this can be approved.
- That picture doesn't look like a bow it needs to be changed - Is it imbued or enchanted? - Description needs to be changed because this is meant to be a weapon, not an accessory - It can not have a stored form because it lacks the transformation spec - Put how many times you can use it before it jams - Make sure to put it is 8 mana per trigger used - Can't really use your mana in this way, it would need to be an actual bowstring - Can't really say "Standard length and width" because everyone's standard is different as it goes on the size of the bow which in turn goes on the size of the person using it.
When everything is corrected feel free to put it back up again for grading and we will get back to you as soon as possible.
Post by Leonard Vermillion on Apr 11, 2021 8:21:52 GMT -5
Hi there, here's my 2c on the whole thing:
-First off, I need you to specify the uses in the Type & Uses section.
- Second, the appereance and lore has a couple nonos for me.
If this is a longbow there is no way you can mount it on your arm and not use a hand. Bows are two handed weapons, you can't use a bow with one hand let alone no hands. Also, once again, anything in lore and appereance doesn't count as an item ability. If it's used in a specific way, all that stuff should be covered in the ability section, though I don't think wrist mounted longbows will be accepted.
I get what you're going for, but a longbow might not be the item you'd want. Now a wrist mounted crossbow could be up your alley, but you would need to update both picture and description accordingly.
I would also like you to specify weight and lenght of the item.
Once you decide what to do, feel free to put the item up for grading.
Post by Leonard Vermillion on Apr 20, 2021 10:22:01 GMT -5
One other quick adjutstment to do.
Transforming items would need to have Transformation spec on it for them to be able to change their appereance/functions, so you might want to either alter the weapon spec or just keep it as a regular wristbow.
Once you decide what to do, feel free to put the item up for grading. Almost there!
